Subplots and Storylines - May 2018

Happy Saturday, everyone! By the time this post goes up, it'll be almost Sunday. Oops. It actually feels like I just wrote my last S&S post a week ago, but May is over already. Who on earth gave it permission to go so fast? It's been a really good month. For one thing, it was unseasonably warm, and the days were full of gardening, ice cream, and peppermint tans.*


*This is when a bookworm sits out in the sun to read and ends up with limbs that are pink on top and still winter-white on the bottom.


For another, May was also full of friend-stuff. Confession: although I love all my friends dearly, I am also an introvert who guards her alone time and likes her social life to have . . . gaps in between. But this month I decided that my introversion, while valid, does not have to mean I'm stingy with my time! So I ended up face-timing a writer friend, shopping with a college friend, inviting another friend over for dinner, and then taking a six-hour road trip to another pal's place for a weekend. (All of you extroverts may take this moment to laugh at me making a big deal over only four social events.)


Anyway, 'twas all very fun! I'd never road-tripped anywhere by myself before, so it was like a mini-vacation. The friend I visited (whom I haven't seen in a year) lives on a farm with horses and bees and the most affectionate, slobbery, big dogs I've ever met.


And now on to the story-related happenings of May: the ones I watched, read, and wrote.

Screen Subplots

Justice League


Recommendation: do not watch this half a week after seeing Infinity War, because it will pale in comparison. It seems like Justice League was trying to be a DC version of Avengers and it just . . . didn't work for me at all. The plot wasn't cohesive, none of the major characters had any personal stakes in their cause, the villain was a negative number on the Scariness Scale, and Clark Kent's face was botched by poor CGI. The best part of the movie was the presence of Wonder Woman and the introduction of the Flash. (Except Grant Gustin brought the character to life so, so much better in the TV show than Ezra Miller does in this flick.)


My brother reviewed the movie over on The Steadfast Pen a while back, and he went into more detail about some of the things that didn't quite work.

Spider-Man 2


Watched this with my siblings and ahhh, the cringe! The nostalgia! Sadly, it was far less cool this time around than it was the first time I saw it. But it's one of those movies that's still fun to see, if only for the fact that my siblings and I had way too much fun joking about it.

The Death Cure


Still every bit as good as when I saw it in theaters! I might even go so far as to say it was the strongest movie in the trilogy. More thoughts were shared in February's Subplots and Storylines post!

Emma (BBC 2009 version)


I LOVED IT SO MUCH. This is only the second Jane Austen movie I've seen--the first being Pride and Prejudice, the one with Kiera Knightley--and I thoroughly enjoyed all four hours of it. So much that I want to go buy it right now.


Emma is the sort of person who believes she is always right, and it was rewarding to see the crumbling of her matchmaking plans force her to grow in humility. And Mr. Knightley . . . I didn't think anyone could top Mr. Darcy, but Knightley might have just done it for me. He and Emma have the sort of bantering/bickering sort of friendship that grows between two stubborn people who aren't afraid to speak their minds. His loyalty and honesty was fantastic.


There was a plethora of other vibrant characters gracing the screen too: the worrisome Mr. Woodhouse ("They might do something reprehensible--like open the windows!"), kind governess Anne Taylor, empty-headed Harriet Smith, snobbish Mr. Elton, charismatic Frank Churchill, incessantly talkative Mrs. Bates, and reserved Jane Fairfax. Speaking of Mrs. Bates, I found the picnic scene surprisingly convicting--if you've watched it, you might know why.

But seriously. Mr. Knightley. Excellent character right there. I must read the book.

Page Storylines

Eye of the Oracle // Bryan Davis


Well, I've finished rereading the Dragons in Our Midst series this year, so it was time to kick off the Oracles of Fire series! Returning to this huge story was really enjoyable. I'm in awe of Bryan Davis's ability to weave a single story through millennia--literally, because the book starts just before the Great Flood and ends in the modern day.


Sapphira and Elam remain some of my favorite characters; so do Makaidos* and Thigocia! It was neat to refresh my memory on all the connections between the dragons and other important characters--both heroes and villains--throughout history. But lest you think this tome is boring, oh no! Battles with demonic Watchers, the toils of underground slaves, portal jumping, the growth of a Nephilim army, and so much more jumps off the page.


*Makaidos is probably one of my favorite dragons ever.


Plus the foreshadowing is spectacular. New readers could pick this up without much trouble, but readers of Dragons in Our Midst will catch dozens of hints.


5 stars!

The Sea of Monsters // Rick Riordan


I read primarily YA, so whenever I dip my toes in MG (middle grade), I'm fascinated and amused by the different approach. But before I go all writer nerd on you, here's what I noticed as a reader.


I loved the humor, the taxi of death, Tyson, Percy's water navigation skills, the sirens, the man-eating sheep, and the shouted conversation about Nobody.* The villain's plan, although revealed a little late, was great too. On the negative side, the plot matched that of the first book almost beat for beat, and there could have been some more introspection at certain moments that needed a reaction.


*"I REMEMBER YOU!"


Thankfully, Percy didn't suffer the fate of the unchanged-protagonist-who-learned-nothing-in-the-previous-book. He was stronger, braver, and more at ease with his gifts, even if he was simultaneously more upset with his father. I'm looking forward to finally continuing the Percy Jackson series.


4.5 stars!

Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone // J.K. Rowling


Hello, my name is Tracey Dyck, I'm 22 years old, and this was my first foray into the world of Harry Potter.


Yes. You may all gasp.


But guess what? I'm utterly enchanted! This made me laugh out loud multiple times, and made me want to visit Hogwarts for myself. Harry is a wonderful hero--sympathetic, clever, relatable, and unexpectedly brave. Ron and Hermione make for brilliant friends. The whole cast of characters, in fact, was distinct and charming.


I did have some quibbles. There were times when the lying and sneaking around actually weren't necessary--and it did seem that Harry and his pals could have faced more consequences for their frequent breaches. Hagrid, though I love him, was revealed to be a bit less worthy of respect than I thought, which was too bad. And I still can't figure out how Harry and Ron chucked pipes and bathroom taps at the troll--did they rip them right out of the wall or what? (Seriously, someone please enlighten me.)


But the deft writing style, magical wonder, and pop-off-the-page characters make this a book I'll probably buy. It may have taken me two decades to get to Hogwarts, but I'll be visiting again real soon.


4.5 stars!

Gravestone (audiobook) // Travis Thrasher


What better way to make a road trip pass by quickly than to listen to an audiobook? Although I did briefly question the wisdom of listening to a creepy story whilst driving through remote countryside. Heh.


This sequel to Solitary is a dark and winding road, much like the mountain path leading up to the Crag's Inn where Chris works. It's gloomy. It's sad at times, intense in others, but just like the inn, there are rays of light beginning to penetrate Chris's messed-up world.


The plot kept me on my toes as I tried to figure out who to trust. Even though I've read this book before, that was five years ago, and I forgot some of the twists. There were genuinely creepy moments standing in stark contrast to several sweet interactions and thought-provoking conversations. Chris's emotions are very real--the grief, the anger, the confusion, the weariness, the fear.


Looking forward to revisiting the rest of the series. 5 stars!

Written Subplots

Despite the fact that I am so behind on my writing goals, this was actually a pretty productive month. (More on those goals in an upcoming post, I think.)


During the first half of May, I finished compiling beta reader feedback on The Brightest Thread. This covered chapters 20 through 31. I also reviewed the feedback forms I had sent them, which resulted in a document almost fifty pages long.

Because my head was swirling with all the helpful reactions and advice from about a dozen different people, I cracked open a fresh, new notebook to scribble in while I edit. This will be the place I nail down the biggest issues to fix in each chapter and brainstorm how to patch them up.


And then . . . in the second half of May, I dove into ACTUAL EDITING. I love this stage of the writing process! But it's also challenging right now. In the past couple of weeks, I've rewritten my opening several times (bringing me up to about six different versions of chapter one, including one that was split into two chapters because it got so long). Just when I thought I might be on the right track, some sage feedback from a mentor opened my eyes to several blunders I'd made while trying to correct the original chapter's mistakes. Sometimes you have to make a mess in order to clean up, you know?


So as June unfolds, I'll keep hammering away at chapter one. It's a tricky beast, for some reason, but I just know there's a smashing good opening to be found somewhere!


By the by, once editing is really in full swing this summer, I plan to put together a walk-through post of my editing process, since some of you writerly types have shown interest.


On another writing note, Realm Makers is less than 50 days away now! Say what?! This month I scheduled my mentor appointment and two agent appointments, which makes the conference feel incredibly real and incredibly close. I also submitted the first ten pages of The Brightest Thread for a paid critique appointment . . . which now feels a bit silly, since I'm reworking those pages entirely anyway. But perhaps I'll still glean something valuable from the feedback?


Yet another writing thingamajig that went down this May was a brainstorming/planning session for a Very Secret Project. I shall not breathe a word of it yet, but it's coming along. Simmering busily in the back of my mind while I go about my work and editing and other such things. I have tentatively planned to reveal this project sometime this summer, so keep your eyes peeled!*


*Is this not just the weirdest phrase? The thought of putting a potato peeler anywhere near my eyeballs is horrendous.

So yes! That was May!

I hung out with actual people, went on a road trip, got a peppermint tan, hopped back on the Percy Jackson train, and at very long last caught the Harry Potter train too. (Speaking of trains, I'm so happy to finally understand what platform nine and three-quarters means.) I've not had this much writing news to share in a long time, and it feels good. Also I seem to be footnote-happy today. So there you have it. My summer break is off to a lovely start.

Now tell me, how are you? Do you like road trips? Harry Potter: yay or nay? Any guesses as to the nature of the Very Secret Project? What are your summer plans, folks?